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|  | "Lover's Lament" by John Di Rosa « Thread Started on Jul 31, 2007, 5:02pm » | |
Hello, and welcome to the public discussion forum of Fantastic Horror. The topic of this thread is "Lover's Lament" by John Di Rosa, featured in Issue #2.
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If you haven't read the poem yet, STOP RIGHT HERE and go read it!! This discussion may contain spoilers. At the end of the poem, you'll find a link back to this thread.
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|  | Re: "Lover's Lament" by John Di Rosa « Reply #1 on Aug 14, 2007, 6:15pm » | |
Having read John's poems in two issues running, I hope we'll see a third for our next issue (although I understand that a story's on the way). Although, if he continues with the general trend of chivalric-necrophiliac odes, blacklisting may be in FH's future--shades of "The Loved Dead" . . . .
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|  | Re: "Lover's Lament" by John Di Rosa « Reply #2 on Apr 21, 2008, 5:10am » | |
I love this one. Those final lines are definitely the power-kick. Wow...
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|  | Re: "Lover's Lament" by John Di Rosa « Reply #3 on May 22, 2008, 8:27am » | |
Nicely done with this.
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|  | Re: "Lover's Lament" by John Di Rosa « Reply #4 on May 22, 2008, 8:24pm » | |
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Thanks Po.
It's hard to imagine loving someone so much, but what can I say?
At least he will always "Have Her"
HA HA HE HE HO HO . . . . They're coming to take me away . . .
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|  | Re: "Lover's Lament" by John Di Rosa « Reply #5 on May 26, 2008, 2:17pm » | |
To you...it could still happen!
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|  | Re: "Lover's Lament" by John Di Rosa « Reply #6 on May 27, 2008, 7:32pm » | |
May 26, 2008, 2:17pm, krakenten wrote:| To you...it could still happen! |
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It will probably happen, and when they do take me away, I'm sure that wherever I end up, the people there will be just as shocked and appalled, and at just as much of a loss as to where to send me next.
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