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|  | "The Return of Camazotz" by Richard Eline
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Hello, and welcome to the public discussion forum of Fantastic Horror. The topic of this thread is "The Return of Camazotz" by Richard Eline, featured in Issue #5.
Writers and artists love to get feedback, especially when it's thoughtful and constructive. Please take a moment to share your thoughts, and help keep the Fantastic Horror community alive!
If you haven't read the story yet, STOP RIGHT HERE and go read it!! This discussion may contain spoilers. At the end of the story, you'll find a link back to this thread.
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| | Re: "The Return of Camazotz" by Richard Eline
« Reply #1 on Apr 18, 2008, 12:06pm » | |
So this is how one writes when one is well read and not afraid to do a little research. I love the flow of this continuing saga. Everything is just very matter of factly. A couple of heads popped off here, giant bats over there, oh darn, I dropped my cigar.
Great job.
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| | Re: "The Return of Camazotz" by Richard Eline
« Reply #2 on Apr 18, 2008, 1:04pm » | |
Not to mention a broken leg.
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| | Re: "The Return of Camazotz" by Richard Eline
« Reply #3 on Jun 7, 2008, 2:18am » | |
...this tale is a very fine combo of Mythos, spun with down home, even occasionally humerous references. Read it thrice. Will yet againe.
You do a superb job of "no nonsense" Mythos-referencing and that, plus the simple nature of the characters makes it a fun read. Dark and light together. Jolly good show.
Ron
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| | Re: "The Return of Camazotz" by Richard Eline
« Reply #4 on Jun 7, 2008, 8:02pm » | |
Hard-boiled horror, my friend.
This guy owes not a little bit to Chester Drum, Travis McGee and Mike Hammer.
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