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|  | "In between Sleep and Death" by John Di Rosa
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Hello, and welcome to the public discussion forum of Fantastic Horror. The topic of this thread is "In between Sleep and Death" by John Di Rosa, featured in Issue #6.
Writers and artists love to get feedback, especially when it's thoughtful and constructive. Please take a moment to share your thoughts, and help keep the Fantastic Horror community alive!
If you haven't read the poem yet, STOP RIGHT HERE and go read it!! This discussion may contain spoilers. At the end of the poem, you'll find a link back to this thread.
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| | Re: "In between Sleep and Death" by John Di Rosa
« Reply #1 on Jun 3, 2008, 10:00am » | |
comments from the workshop:
Jan 17, 2008, 7:44pm, krakenten wrote:
Jan 19, 2008, 6:25am, suctionmule wrote:| ...that's good stuff, man. |
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Jan 21, 2008, 11:50am, charlesfarley wrote:
Thanks Guys,
This one was from a seldom visited corner of my black heart.
It hurts to go there so I try and avoid it but some good things come out of it so it's kinda a wash. |
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you don't usually use rhyme and rhythm in your FH work, so i've attached a significance to it. this song-like quality among other factors makes me wonder if it's from a human or immortal point of view. did you only intend one or the other?
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A monkey riding a dog is probably the awesomest thing that could ever happen. |
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