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|  | "Bartender" by JJ Burke
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Hello, and welcome to the public discussion forum of Fantastic Horror. The topic of this thread is "Bartender" by JJ Burke, featured in Issue #6.
Writers and artists love to get feedback, especially when it's thoughtful and constructive. Please take a moment to share your thoughts, and help keep the Fantastic Horror community alive!
If you haven't read the poem yet, STOP RIGHT HERE and go read it!! This discussion may contain spoilers. At the end of the poem, you'll find a link back to this thread.
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| | Re: "Bartender" by JJ Burke
« Reply #1 on Jun 5, 2008, 3:33am » | |
I liked this the first time I read it, and I like it as much or more now.
As I mentioned to J.J. previously, the old west seems so near sometimes that it seems we could tear the filmy gauze of time, step through the rent, and emerge back in those weird old days of our country's history. This piece transported me there.
Nice work!
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| | Re: "Bartender" by JJ Burke
« Reply #2 on Oct 5, 2008, 4:46pm » | |
now check out the addition of kyle burles's 'gunslinger' illustration! i think it complements the poem very well.
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| | Re: "Bartender" by JJ Burke
« Reply #3 on Nov 25, 2008, 2:30pm » | |
Very impressive, JJ! The art-work was also very good--very creepy! I really like the "Gunslinger" theme. I wonder if this "Gunslinger" has a "Dark Tower" of his own. No pun intended. (okay, maybe a little pun, but no assumption.) Excellent work, man!
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